Monday, October 21, 2019

"Eleven" Analysis: Symbols

We've just finished writing personal narratives, sharing experiences from our lives that carry weight and have meaning. Now we are transitioning to analysis writing, using Sandra Cisneros's essay "Eleven" as the text. 

There is a symbol in the passage. What is the symbol? What does it represent?

44 comments:

Anonymous said...

Alex Beck PD 7
The symbol in the passage is the teacher, despite it looking like it would be the sweater. The teacher represents all of the stress and struggles of growing up, and how you aren’t able to cope with them right away

Anonymous said...

Myles Rush Pd. 6

The symbol in the passage is the teacher, who represents power and authority over others.

lucia said...

Stephen Forbin PD 7
The symbol is the sweater which represents the things in life that you don't want, but are imposed on you by people who have authority

Anonymous said...

Deena Habash PD.6
They symbol is the sweater which represents Rachel's shame and embarrassment

Anonymous said...

Cyntia Ady pd 3
The symbol is the red sweater which symbolizes her vulnerability and insecurities.

Anonymous said...

Carson Nash Pd: 3

The sweater represents the curve-balls life can throw you. You may not want them but you have to deal with them as they come your way.

Anonymous said...

Sam Swarna

The symbol in the story is the red sweater, and it represents the shame, embarrassment, and harassment she endured.

Anonymous said...

Christian Period 3

The symbol of the passage is age. Rachel was comparing age to behavior and responsibility.

Anonymous said...

EVan Cawthorne
Pd;3
10/25/19

The sweater symbols her mood in the passage when it is on her desk like a red mountain.

Anonymous said...

The sweather is the symbol because it telling us about her mood
Jeremiah Remy period3

Anonymous said...

Emerson Chavarria Pd.3

The symbol was the red sweater and it reprsented embarrasment as like the story said Rachel really did not want to put it on

Anonymous said...

Anthony Pineiro
Pd: 3

-The symbol in the short story, "Eleven" by Sandra Cisneros, is the red sweater. The sweater symbolizes not only Rachel's shame at being accused, but also the control Mrs. Price has over her. Although Rachel tries to move the sweater away from her, she cannot escape it (she obliges when Mrs. Price demands that she puts it on). As such, when she's wearing it, the sweater serves as a representation of Rachel's powerlessness against Mrs. Price's demands.

Anonymous said...

In the short story "Eleven" by Sandra Cisneros, her actions at separate ages resembles many parts of her personality.


Colin Simmonds

Anonymous said...

Joseph Huddle
pd 6
The symbol in the story "Eleven" is the red sweater. It represents her shame. When she pushes it to the edge of her desk, she is symbolically pushing away her shame.

Anonymous said...

Trey
The meaning of eleven is that there is this girl call Rachel how she is embarrassed and sad and it symbolizes how she sad because the teacher was telling her its her sweater then to shy to talk back and everyone made fun of her because her sweater stinks.

Anonymous said...

The symbol in the passage is the teacher who represents a controlling power and another symbol is the red sweater which symbolizes poverty.

Anonymous said...

Mychel Lee

The symbol in the passage is the teacher who represents a controlling power and another symbol is the red sweater which symbolizes poverty.

mine was the one above without my name.

Anonymous said...

Madison J pd6
The symbol in the passage "Eleven" is the red sweater. It symbolizes the power that her teacher has over. Towards the end of the passage the teacher makes Rachel put the sweater on which she didn't have to do. Of course Rachel did, because she didn't want to get in any more trouble then she already was. The teacher didn't even try to listen to her when Rachel said it wasn't her sweater.

Anonymous said...

Emma Kelly, P7

The red sweater in the story is the symbol, meant to represent Rachel's negative internal feelings. Throughout the passage, she is very distraught and upset but unable to express it, the same way she is unable to explain to her teacher that she doesn't own the sweater.

Anonymous said...

Reese johnson pd.6

The symbol in this passage is how power or superiority comes from age and how adults have final say and its hard to overcome what they may tell you that is wrong and you cant say anything against them.

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Ryan Brinker
Pd: 6
The red sweater is the symbol and it is a symbol of Rachel's powerlessness and embarrassment. The sweater is also a symbol of the struggles that she is going through when she was eleven.

Anonymous said...

The symbol is red sweater, and it represents her lack of power. Through the passage it shows how is shy and she doesn't know how to express her feelings.

Ieda Tamene
pd 6

Anonymous said...

The symbol is red sweater, and it represents her lack of power. Through the passage it shows how is shy and she doesn't know how to express her feelings.

Ieda Tamene
pd 6

Anonymous said...

The symbolism is the sweater, which represents the adversities faced in life and Rachel's inability to free herself from them because of her own fear and timidness.

Anonymous said...

^^^ Christine Slaughter, period 7

Unknown said...

Ben Adjoyi Pd. 7
The symbol is the teacher to Rachel. Representing authority over others.

Anonymous said...

Catherine Blumhagen, Period 7
The symbol of the passage is the red sweater. The sweater represents her struggles and embarrassments that she faces, because she didn't have the power within her to get rid of the problem.

Unknown said...

Laura middelthon pd 7

the symbol is the red sweater that represents how embarrassed she was in front of her class

Anonymous said...

Ruba Ibrahim Pd. 7

The symbol is the sweater and it represents her embarrassment and powerlessness in the situation because Mrs Price has power over her and even though she wants to escape from the sweater she can’t.

Anonymous said...

They symbol is the sweater which represents Rachel's shame
myles Armstead per 6

Edward Caraballo said...

The symbol is the read sweater. It represents the power that the teacher has over Rachel, it makes Rachel seem powerless because she is forced to leave it on her desk and forced to put on.
Edward Caraballo Pd 7

Anonymous said...

Atsem Pd.7
The symbol is the red sweater. The red sweater symbolizes the teachers power and authority over Rachel and it symbolizes her feeling of hopelessness, as she's forced to put it on even though it's not her sweater.

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Aidan Montano P.7

The symbol in the passage is the red sweater. The sweater represents her inexperience and the teacher's superiority over her. Once she put on the sweater, her teacher gained full control of her. She put on the sweater which represents that she has accepted how inexperienced she was and didn't know how to deal with the situation.

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Ephrata
pd.3

the red sweater. it represents her feeling the article.

Anonymous said...

Caleb cameros Pd. 6

the symbol of this passage is the red sweater. it seems the sweater is some sort of controlling mechanics and when she puts it on the teacher controls her

Anonymous said...

The read sweater symbolizes , everything red in her birthday . Rachel's red sweater and embarrassment .

Anonymous said...

The symbol in the passage is age. Age is constantly being brought up or represented throughout the passage; with the teacher and how she has authority and a type of power over Rachel because she is older. And second, Rachel repeatedly mentions how as you get older, you don't always feel/act like the age you are.

Danielle Bien-Aimé
Pd.7

Anonymous said...

Marisol Cabrera PD: 7

The symbol in the passage is the red sweater. The red sweater symbolizes much more than just an ugly red sweater, it symbolizes the degrading going on in the classroom. It symbolizes the powerless feeling that Rachel feels.

Anonymous said...

Lori Thomas
Pd:7
The symbol is the red sweater and age. The red sweater represents all of her embarrassment and the terrible experience of being ashamed and not able to speak up.

Anonymous said...

Adrian Barriga Pd.7

My symbol is the sweater, because it expresses the embarrassment that Rachel felt.

Anonymous said...

LeAnn schuttig pd.3
The bigger meaning of the passage is he understanding of ages and what age she feels in certain situation.

Anonymous said...

Jenna Alvarado Pd.3
the symbol of the passage is the red sweater . the red sweater represents how she feels embarrassed and ashamed on how she wasn't able to speak up for her self .

Unknown said...

Mayeli Guerra
Pd:3
The symbol for the passage is the red sweater because represent how Rachel feel during the story and the fear of speak up and say no it's not my.