Read the following excerpt from Zora Neale Hurston's essay "How It Feels to Be Colored Me" (1928).
"But in the main, I feel like a brown bag of miscellany propped against a wall. Against a wall in company with other bags, white, red and yellow. Pour out the contents, and there is discovered a jumble of small things priceless and worthless. A first-water diamond, an empty spool, bits of broken glass, lengths of string, a key to a door long since crumbled away, a rusty knife-blade, old shoes saved for a road that never was and never will be, a nail bent under the weight of things too heavy for any nail, a dried flower or two still a little fragrant. In your hand is the brown bag. On the ground before you is the jumble it held--so much like the jumble in the bags, could they be emptied, that all might be dumped in a single heap and the bags refilled without altering the content of any greatly. A bit of colored glass more or less would not matter. Perhaps that is how the Great Stuffer of Bags filled them in the first place--who knows?"
So much is going on in this short passage. She speaks of race, of finding one's identity, of "the Great Stuffer of Bags" - the Creator and the cosmos.
In your post create a metaphor that describes what you feel like.
Give at least three different tangible items that help us understand who you are and where you find yourself physically, spiritually, and emotionally at this point in your life.
80 comments:
Mariyah Pd:3
My life is like a train wreck it has so much going on in like with school,Sports,and Band I don't get any time to myself and it is really difficult to spend time with my friends.
leAnn 3
I feel like A cup, A broken Cup and glue, broken but trying to put myself back together like before
Alex Period 7
I am a zombie, mindlessly binging Netflix. I am a computer mouse, clicking all of the time. I am a computer monitor, displaying what my brain tells me to.
Ben Adjoyi Pd.7
My life is the weather. It goes day by day. Sometimes it can predictable, Other times there are surprises.
Stephen Forbin Period 7
I am a polar bear trapped in an igloo at home. I am a tank when I am playing on the field. I am an octopus when I am in school
Brookelyn Period 7
I am a vessel. I am open to and absorb new information. Other times I am closed off and nothing can enter.
Adrian Period 7
My life is like math. I have many problems. In the end it could either be resolved or left undiscussed.
Maetti D pd:7th
Laura M 7
my life is like an elevator it will go up and down and sometimes breaks but most of the time it works
Atsem Pd.7
I'm like an owl, quiet but smart
Christine S Period 7
My life is like standing on the edge of a cliff with a gentle breeze blowing, therefore safe but only when alert and aware.
Ackeem Pd7
I am competative I am a dolphin at school and I have a kind heart
stressful,interesting,outta place
Sade J period7
I am a nothing because idk
Catherine B Pd 7
I am a caterpillar because my life is young. One day I'll grow up and be a butterfly.
Jakyah Period 7
I am a butterfly. I am pretty and fascinating. Other times I am delicate and fragile
Eduardo Paz
paz
i am bible without a reader. I want to read but dont have any time to
I am a bear, I am fierce and strong.
Marisol C. Period 7
I am my necklace, I am an art sketchbook, I am a volleyball.
Lori T. Period 7
My life is a broken clock, Not moving forward,so stuck in one place.
Adrian Barriga Pd. 7
My life is a linear slope going below 0.
Edward C Period. 7
My life is like a mountain and behind it is beautiful scenery. You have to climb over the mountain and work hard to get the payoff of seeing the beautiful view.
Evan Ominsky
I am a big book with too much information to read.
Exosé K period:07
I am a volleyball, sunshine and a bible.
Ange period 7
three things that represent my life is quiet, books and field hockey stick
Aidan Montano Pd. 7
I am a rubber band, I feel stretched out when I try to hold many things together at once, but I am perfectly fine without anything tugging at me.
cyntia pd 3
my life is like an escalator, it can go either up and down but even when it gets stuck i know it’ll start moving in the right direction again soon.
which mean that I am smart
Anthony Piñeiro Pd. 3
-I am (1) a trick candle. The wax foundation represents my determination, and the flames represent my ambitions/endeavors. No matter how rough the wind is (how much adversity I face), I can always keep getting back up. I am also (2) water - I am quite flexible and can adapt to different situations. Finally, I am (3) a book. Many people don't become intrigued by a novel until they start reading. Similarly, others might not think very much of me until they get to know me well.
Carson Nash Pd 3
I am a boat in rough swell, moving around a lot but becoming steadier as I slow down.
I'm a pen cause I write my own future.
Antwone Period 3
I'm a story to be told.I'm a tree standing tall and strong.I'm a book to be read.
Martin pd7
I'm a pen cause I write my own future.
I am like a kite and the wind is how the day is going. Some days its going well when the wind is going.I am like rubber I am flexible. I am also like a crash waiting to happen you never to know whats coming.
My life is like the sky its sunny when my life is good and rainy when I have bad days -Leah A pd.3
Christian Pd.3
Im like a piece of metal, I could bend but wont break.
My life is like a escelator its ups and downs but it always keeps going
Emerson Pd.3
My life is like a pencil. I can work hard for what I want even when the led breaks I know I'll be sharpen again to work hard again
Gabriela Escobar
pd-3
my life is a highway because it goes on and on forever
Ephrata d pd.3
I am an unfinished book still gaining knowledge and information. I am a flower that has yet to bloom waiting for my time. And I am a sponge take in all that I can.
I am a athletic man I dont stop moving,i use bats all the time like im in a bat cave.Im a ruuner like im running a marthon.
Jenna A Period 3
i'm a silent movie,you have to really pay attention in order to understand the actions of the character .
Mayeli Guerra
period 3
I feel broken Like a plate and I tried to put myself together
Jakyah Burnette Pd.7
I am my mom after work
ange 7 i am a field hockey stick, book,quiet
Ruba Ibrahim Pd.7
I am flowers growing through the the cracks of a sidewalk, representing resilience. I am a bike trying to keep balance in order to keep moving forward. I am a light bulb that symbolizes my creativity (ideas).
Colin Simmonds Pd. 6
I'm a mirror because your action determines my reaction.
Reese Johnson pd 6
I am a star that hasn't had the moment to shine.
Joe Huddle Pd.6
I am the glue that keeps me stuck to my friends, I am a spotlight waiting to be turned on at the start of the show, and I am a musical instrument floating through the score.
Mychel Lee Pd.6
I am an artist, I plan and sketch out my future before using permanent marker.
madison j
I feel like I am a a piece of candy at the bottom of the bag
David F. pd.6
I'm a boat cause I sail through my classes.
Emma Kelly P6
I am a bench outside a church, I am a dog-eared page, and I am tall socks and pinstriped skirts on a windy day.
Nathan Busey pd 7
I am a candy bar i can be sweet and sometimes salty
Alejandra Olivares pd 7.
I am like a butterfly because they learn to fly out on their own and they go where ever freely.
Ieda Tamene pd 6
I am an elevator, because my life goes up and down. It can break. It's not impossible to fix.
Adriana Gomez Pd6
Im a stylist because i love the cloths
tamiya jackson pd6.
i am a pencil that has been broken to many times because im so tired form school.
Ryan Brinker Pd: 6
I am the ocean on a bright sunny day. I am happy, cool and sometimes I'm salty.
Deena Habash 6
I am a warm fireplace when it snows outside, I am tennis ball bouncing around. I am a pen.
Caleb Cameros Pd.6
I am the cloudy sky that you don't want to see and if something angers me I turn to a thunder storm that will ruin your day
Pd:6
I am life changing as the days go by.
I am lost thoughts and ideals always changing and never coming to fruition.
I am one with the world never staying the same steadily coming to an end.
Myles Armstead pd 6
I am a open hand
Kennedy Thornton 6th pd
I am a bed, flower, and an athletic person, being active.
Treyon Hicks Pd:6
I am shatterproof because I'm unbreakable
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Rachel Rivera pd 6
i am a pencil it can create and be fixed
i'm a tiny star .
Emmely Alvarez ^
i use a time to get up in the morning.
Myles Rush Pd. 6
I am a head of hair, I may change but I'm still me. I am a paperclip, flexible but still breakable. I am a salad, made of mixed emotions.
I am a slide, the one that's fun to ride and gives a rush, and the one where you're in your own head, going so fast, everything surrounding you becomes a blur
Danielle Bien-Aimé pd.7
Good Job!!
I thankful for my mom, I'm thankful for my fam and i'm thankful for the roof over my head and i'm thankful for having a education also i am thankful for my manz.
Treyon Hicks Pd:6th
1. Thankful for the Rodeo king burger
2. Thankful for apple earbuds
3. Thankful for sneakers
4. Thankful for Family & friends
5. Thankful for everything else
i feel like this essay expresses a certain type of comfort with the different colors and forms.
Amari hart
Prd 3
I learned words can have a very strong effect such as speaking up can have a powerful outcome . After listening to all three vignettes the things they said stood out and could've both had different outcomes.
Trayevon Toler pd.7
The vignette with the Korean lady stood out to me the most. She show's so much emotion that it makes me hurt for her. She's upset about how the her people don't get the same justice as African Americans and how her people get left out a lot.
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